Peer Assessment

This is a peer assessment of comments. This tells me what i need to change and what i should keep the same.
Positives

• Genre is obvious
• Bold text that is easy to read
• Banner is bold and clear
• Main sell line in good position

Negatives

• Make image on front cover bigger
• Title could be bolder
• Contents page layout could be more picture dominated and less text so its more interesting and easier to read.
• Put sell lines both sides of main image
• Move bar code

Things i will change and improve on:

• Make image bigger on front cover
• Make contents pictures bigger
• Put sell lines both sides of the image
• Move the bar code
• Edit tile and experiment with fonts

Changes Made to Flatplans

I have made a few changes to my magazine cover sketches as there were a few faults. I have decided to make my main image central as it will be more eye catching. I have changed the style of my font title as before it was hard to read and now it looks much clearer. the banner at the top has been made thinner to look neater. The bar code has been moved so that it is not covering any of the main image. Sell lines have been added to both sides to make the magazine look more full and realistic.

For the contents i have made a banner across the top of the page to be predominant so that it is the first thing to be read on the page in order for the reader to summarize the meaning of the page. I have made the main picture larger and to the left in order to leave enough space to make a column that will list the features of the magazine. I have added another picture in the bottom right corner to make the page more interesting.

Flat Plans

This is a flat plan for the front cover of my music magazine. The name i have decidedf to call my magazine is 45RPM, the reason i have chosen this name is because it is short and snappy and relates to music. I have decided i will use 1 image on my front cover and i think it will be a medium close up, however, i will make thye image go underneath all of my writing on the cover as it will be more interesting and eye catching, unlike this drawing. I will use colours that are unisex for my writing and title as it will best suit my target audience. I dont think my flat plan is an exact image of my magazine as it is difficult to imagine what the final product will be like. The background of the frontcover, behind my model will be plain to make my model stand out and be the main attr4action. I will add more sell lines in the real thing and especially on the right as i have not put any on that side in my flat plan. I will make the font bold and easy to read and keep the same colour and style throughout my magazine, on the contents page and the double page spread also. I have placed my main sell line across the bottom of the front cover to draw the readers attention.I chose to make the main sell line large as it is the main feature other than the photograph and will inform the reader who the person featured on the cover is if they have not seen them before.

 This is a flat plan of my contents page. I have decided to make the heading "INSIDE" because its short and snappy and straight to the point. I will keep the colour sheme the same on this page as the cover. The contents page background, a lot like the cover will stay reasonably plain to make any images used stand out. i have boxed in each sell line to make it look neat however i do not intend to keep it like that for my real thing as it looks too boring and un interesting. The pahe numbers will be a sepourate colour from the rest of the text to make it easier to find and stand out. I will also have on my contents page a number of advers, this will make my magazine more realistic and interesting. The main interview will be written in large letters of the name of the band and underneath will be a quote from the interview to interest the reader further. I have also decided to have one main image in the center of my contents page to make it more interesting, however, i have decided i will have more than 1 on the final product. This will make the page less dull and more exciting.

This is a sketch of how i would like my double page spread to look. I would like an image to dominate the left page to make it look more appealing and to catch the readers eye. i have decided to write my article on the right page and into 3 different columns to break up the text a bit and to still make it look professional. i have decided that i will put a background onto the page being all the text and images to make the page look more interesting and to draw the reader in. i will use a colour theme of red black and white, just like the rest of my magazine to keep the theme on going. However, although i will keep the theme going, i am going to create some variation  of colour by adding different colour in my images.

Planning My Article

I will write an introduction in my magazine article. It will draw the reader in and make them want to read more.

I will write in third person as i think it will be easier to relate to the artist.
I am going to write my article as question and answer as it will be easy to read and straight to the point. It will appeal more to my target audience as they wont want to read lots and lots of text in big paragraphs. I will also write a short introduction about my artist/s featured, giving the reader some background information and informing them on who the artist/s are, what kind of music they produce, album name/s, new music, how long they have been around etc.

Inspirational Images Moodboard

This is a moodboard of images that i have found inspirational for my magazine. I have carefully selected ones that i think work with the genre of my magazine which is Indie/rock. The images are of both male and female as it will best suit my target audience. I have found the images inspirational as the location that they use are all interesting. The poses are all confident and bold and the costume makes a statement about the artist. The light that is used also is inspirational as in each of the images it is used differently.

Image Analysis and Composition

The model seems confident in their body language but not too in your face. its difficult to see the models eyes which makes them a bit mysterious yet we can half see them. This could perhaps show that they are not too overly confident as well.

the setting (by the wall) is interesting and is more exciting. the graffiti on the wall in the bottom right implies attitude and outrage! The models out fit is toned down yet still perfectly acceptable .

The Tattoo on the singers arm is visible so showing that he has a distinctive way about him.

The Models all look confident with their body language. They are all catching the audiences eyes by looking straight at them. The image is taken from above so this normally would make the model/s look more vunerable however their poses out weigh the angle of the camera.
The area that they are in looks quite rough so that this creates attitude about the model and could seem quite threatening. Also the location is more interesting than a studio and gives the image more variation.

Research into institutions that distribute similar products

KERRANG!

http://www.mediauk.com/owners/88/bauer-media
http://www.kerrang.com/  

19th January 2012


Baur  make a large range of magazines. For example T.V, Motorcycle, Music, Garden and Cooking
A "big name" magazine they produce is "GRAZIA" and a niche magazine is "Bird Watching"
Other big names are:

• Heat
• Grazia
• FHM
• MOJO

I dont think i would put my product on their list as there is too much other competition of popular music magazines with a similar genre to mine and this is not creating a wider range for the company.

NME

http://www.mediauk.com/owners/40/ipc-media

http://www.ipcmedia.com/

19th January 2012

IPC Media make a large range of magazines. For example Sport, Design, Pornography, Animal and T.V
A "big name" magazine they produce is "NOW" and a niche magazine is "yachting world|"
Other big names are:

• Look
• TeenNow
• Soap Life
• TV Times

I thing they would be interested in adding my magazine to their list of other products as it has a very similar genre to NME and they dont produce any other music magazines, this could give them a bigger and wider range and there will be less competition between magazines.

Primary Audience Research

i conducted some primary audience research in order to:

• find out what appeals to my target audience

• to discover any flaws or potential improvements that could be made to my magazines genre

• to identify if there are any gaps in the market and place a refreshing new twist on the genre. 

1. What do you like about the layout?

1. What do you like about the colour scheme?

1. What first attracts your attention?

1. How should it be laid out?

 

These are an example of the kind of product i intend to make myself. They give a good idea of style, colour, fonts, photographs, interviews etc. i will ask my target audience what they think of these examples, this will then help me decide on what my audience like and dislike and how i can make my magazine as appealing as possible for them.

My Questions:

 

From this i have decided:

Secondary Research

Audience Research 
The genre of music i have chosen to base my magazine on is rock and indie. To research into what the current popular magazines are like i have chosen to look at NME and Kerrang, both of which have a similar genre to my own. This will help me create a magazine image that will appeal to my target audience. I will look at how the pages are laid out, what fonts and colours are used, the style of image and the interests of my audience.

NME Music Magazine

NME's is a very well known music magazine in the UK. It tends to focus on rock and indie music and this influences the style of the reader, for example, their look, their habits and the music that they listen to. A large percentage of NME readers think that it is important to be well dressed, be well informed about things, its worth paying extra for quality goods and they spend a lot of money on clothes. The average age of the reader is 24 and a high percentage states that the readers are male, that work full time. The bands that feature on the cover are usually male artists, this is to create an icons for them. To make them want to dress, look and have the same style. If a female is featured, this is not as common, but this is to create a sex icon.

             


Kerrang Music Magazine
Kerrang is also a very well known music magazine in the UK. Again Like NME the target audience tends to be young adult males around the age of 19. The music that the magazine is based around is loud and full of attitude. The readers tend to be intelligent and desire to be individual. Also they like to keep up to date with the latest technologies and fashion, a lot like the readers of NME. 

                 


My Customer Profile
I have created my own customer profile for my magazine. it is a lot like KERRANG's and NME's as it is a very similar genre and target audience.

Textual Analysis

Research on Prezi

Brief

PRINT

Preliminary exercise: using DTP and an image manipulation program, produce the front page of a new school/college magazine, featuring a photograph of a student in medium close-up plus some appropriately laid-out text and a masthead. Additionally candidates must produce a DTP mock-up of the layout of the contents page to demonstrate their grasp of the program.

Main task: the front page, contents and double page spread of a new music magazine.
All images and text used must be original, produced by the candidate, minimum of FOUR images per candidate.