Peer Assessment

This is a peer assessment of comments. This tells me what i need to change and what i should keep the same.
Positives

• Genre is obvious
• Bold text that is easy to read
• Banner is bold and clear
• Main sell line in good position

Negatives

• Make image on front cover bigger
• Title could be bolder
• Contents page layout could be more picture dominated and less text so its more interesting and easier to read.
• Put sell lines both sides of main image
• Move bar code

Things i will change and improve on:

• Make image bigger on front cover
• Make contents pictures bigger
• Put sell lines both sides of the image
• Move the bar code
• Edit tile and experiment with fonts